What Is Your View On This

Discussion in 'Feedback Requests' started by happymondays, May 25, 2012.

  1. happymondays

    happymondays New Member

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    Hi guys,

    I'd like to get your feedback on www.joovia.com. The site is dedicate to my new... well, it is not a game, it is an entertainment application. I dare to say it is something new. There is no demo available yet and this post isn't about the application. I would like to get feedback on the website.

    Does it make the right impression? Do we need to add more explanation (text) or video?

    Any feedback is appreciated. And thank you for your time!

    (The splash screen is not broken, it's just a temporary jpg image...)
     
  2. Nutter2000

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    I would put more game info on your home page.
    To be honest, my first thought when I saw that was some leisure suit larry type soft-porn game (No offence intended ;))
     
  3. happymondays

    happymondays New Member

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    None taken, and thanks for your view!
    Though she looks hot, the app has nothing to do with porn. She does not strip down or anything. (Just to clarify)
     
  4. Nutter2000

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    No worries

    Yes I got that it wasn't that sort of game but I had to go to the Game Info page to really get a sense of what the game was about.
    So what I was suggesting was maybe that information should be on the home page?
    you'll have about 30 seconds to sell the game to anyone visiting so you should put the best stuff on the front page above the fold.

    Just a suggestion :)
     
  5. happymondays

    happymondays New Member

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    You're quite right about that 30 second. One must throw everything to the visitor's face at once...
    I am gonna replace the static text paragraph with a flash video on the index page. That's more catchy for the eye, and more info can be displayed.
     
  6. Nutter2000

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    Split testing ftw! ;-)
    Test everything, assume nothing is the way with the internet I think :)
     
  7. Purplefacegames

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    Looks good. The fonts on the site are nice and so are the graphics, But ill agree with everyone else, it seems to be lacking any propper information. Its pretty sweet though, sort of reminds me of one of those virtual desktop girls that strip for you lol :) (But obviousley more family friendly hah )
     

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