Need feedback on our design.

Discussion in 'Game Design' started by AXTWO, Sep 20, 2015.

  1. AXTWO

    AXTWO New Member

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    Hi. So me and my friend are creating a simple endless jumping game, and we would love some feedback on our design.

    The player is not in this image but it will look something like a crossy road character. I've just created new treelogs, but there not in this picture, they will be 3 different types so there will be a little more variation on the logs.
     

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  2. melight

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    Looks cool. I like the color, but mostly the consistent style.
     
  3. Withvees

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    This looks really nice! The colors are really good and the sky seems... unfinished?? It's hard to explain. The colors are bright but the sky has this greyish-purple hue to it which doesn't exactly match the colors of the grass and trees. But everything else looks pretty neat
     
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    Thanks. Yes the sky is unfinished, forgotten to write that :)
     
  5. Withvees

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    Ah yes then that's fine haha. Look forward to seeing a finished piece!
     
  6. metateen

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    100% positive that I've posted in here...Well gotta give it another go!

    the design looks very blocky which is nice and all, considering the kind of terrain the game is giving you all not to mention then zone at hand. Very nice and rather attractive.
     
  7. AXTWO

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    So here is a other picture, a little teaser :) [​IMG]
     
  8. metateen

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    Nothing new to add here, only thing to actually bring into attention is that the buttons seem to be a little to wide but aside from that, only a minor nit-pick so it's still good.
     
  9. ashtonbrady45

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    Your designs looks good but not enough I think you must follow the Gamasutra series design. You will get a good idea about design
     
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  10. Spritelings

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    Can I get a link to that area?
     
  11. Rekusi

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    That does look pretty nice! Love the detail of the grass over the riverside. Id love to see a few clouds here and there.
     

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