Well... OK. Harsh as I like :-) Let me get my red pen...
A list of problems
- Runs way to slowly on my pc. Its a high end pentium, 500+mb ram and an ati radeon card and yet it's dog slow. That's a problem because it probably means most of your target audience can't play the game.
- Very slow load time when starting the game with no progress bar or indication it's starting up. I nearly killed the process thinking it was crashed.
- Once I was in the game there was no tutorial to get me started. I clicked on the mouse and tried to aim and stuff but only managed to send one ball off the end. The animation for that was quite stuttery and hard to follow. Then I tried the keyboard. 1 arrow key rotated me in one direction and the up key brough me up into the sky and I didn't know how to get back a normal view. At that point I just gave up.
I think it might be fun. A nice little golf game with this style could be good if it would run well enough and have an easy interface and nice tutorial to lead players in. I think it still needs a lot of work before you can sell it.