Feedback please -- My website and question about game demo XD

[GREENhERMIT]

Dear all XD

I need your help.

Please visit my site and tell me how do you thing about it.

I still learn to use Plimus so "Buy me" button are disable : )

http://www.greenhermit.net/

1. Is it easy to use ?
2. How do you think about overall graphic ?
3. Have any language or graphic plobrem ?

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Another question

Here is my game( demo ) URL : http://www.greenhermit.net/sweetypuzzle.html

1. In demo Player can play 12 levels( from 44 levels ) , too shot ?
2. I think full version's price is $4 , too expensive or too cheap ?


PS. Full version feature
- Run as standalone
- Can set display mode( Windows mode , Fullscreen ) and graphic quality
- 44 levels of gameplay.
- 3 Difficulty levels( Easy , Normal , Hard ).
- Unique puzzle style ; you can put candies everywhere you want( like " Goh" )
- 6 Colors of candy.
- Mold , Death candy , Color filter and Super bomb!
- Can set resolution and graphic quality.
- Enable Ranking system.
- Enable continue system.

Regards

Kittanate \(*0*)/

[Ricardo C]

I like the layout, very simple yet pleasing to the eye. But I recommend making your logo much bigger, I almost missed it.

I definitely think your games are priced way too low. The usual price for downloadable games is $19.95. No reason to sell yourself short, unless you're confident the ultra-low price will lead to more units sold.

As for the language... It definitely needs to be redone. The sentence structure is terrible. It reads like you wrote it in your first language and translated it into English word for word.

And you should add screenshots for the games, especially on the front page. Right now you have screenshots of the title screens of each game, but I think screenshots of the actual gameplay would be better.

[mahlzeit]

The language isn't quite English. And for me the site loaded very slowly.

[mustardseed]

Hmm well the flash was taking a really long time to load. Dont know what was up with that. Anyways, the site seems decent enough. I've definitely seen worse.

Your English definitely needs to be improved on there. It would help make you look more "professional" and it would help instill confidence in the buyer.

If you are only giving the person 32 extra puzzles for $4 that seems fair, but I think a better solution would be to have at least 100 puzzles in the full version for $10-20. Apparently $19.95 is the magic price point that may indies use.

[GREENhERMIT]

I like the layout, very simple yet pleasing to the eye. But I recommend making your logo much bigger, I almost missed it.

I definitely think your games are priced way too low. The usual price for downloadable games is $19.95. No reason to sell yourself short, unless you're confident the ultra-low price will lead to more units sold.

As for the language... It definitely needs to be redone. The sentence structure is terrible. It reads like you wrote it in your first language and translated it into English word for word.

And you should add screenshots for the games, especially on the front page. Right now you have screenshots of the title screens of each game, but I think screenshots of the actual gameplay would be better.

Yes! I write it in my frist language

maybe I should looking for new translator

The language isn't quite English. And for me the site loaded very slowly.

Maybe because server of my site is locate in my country

Hmm well the flash was taking a really long time to load. Dont know what was up with that. Anyways, the site seems decent enough. I've definitely seen worse.

Your English definitely needs to be improved on there. It would help make you look more "professional" and it would help instill confidence in the buyer.

If you are only giving the person 32 extra puzzles for $4 that seems fair, but I think a better solution would be to have at least 100 puzzles in the full version for $10-20. Apparently $19.95 is the magic price point that may indies use.

I see , I'll rethink about Level and Price

If i have good idea to make more level I'll make it

( In my opinion I don't like to play puzzle game too long so I make this game shoter than another puzzle game )


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Thank everybody SO much ~*