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    Hey Everyone !,

    I am new here and thought i would introduce myself. My name is Jimmy Livefjord and i am a freelance environment artist who love making handpainted textures. Recently i launched my own site where people can buy both textures and assets. you can take a look here: www.handpaintedtextures.com

    I have a couple of things i would need help with. one of them is that i dont really know how to reach out to my audience. At the moment i am posting updates on the Unity forums and deviant art. Any suggestions ?

    Also if you have any suggestions on the page please let me know !

    Kindly // Jimmy

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    You should have someone who is comfortable with English look over your grammar. For example, "Nothing of the content on www.handpaintedtextures.com are for free." should be "No content on www.handpaintedtextures.com are free." Other errors include not capitalizing certain letters, not adding a space where there should be one and lack of punctuation at certain places where there should be one.

    Other site related issues:
    - Add a space between the answer and the next question; it looks like one massive block right now.
    - Who is "our" and "us" in your About Us page? If it's just yourself, you should change About Us to only About and make sentences in first person.
    - What's with the empty field? Is that supposed to be a search box. You should fix it. No one knows it's one because there's no button or heading saying Search.

    Anyways, good stuff. Those textures look nice! I hope you do well.

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    Hey man, Thanks alot. I know my grammar is awful. If you got the time i would be forever grateful if you could help me out ?. This page is something that i have startet up going throught 3 different programmers. and changing host one time. I cant even describe how much problem i have had. The truth is that i have so little time i hardly got time to even paint. But i agree, bad spelling makes the page look really unproffesional.

    Thanks alot man !



    Quote Originally Posted by rioka View Post
    You should have someone who is comfortable with English look over your grammar. For example, "Nothing of the content on www.handpaintedtextures.com are for free." should be "No content on www.handpaintedtextures.com are free." Other errors include not capitalizing certain letters, not adding a space where there should be one and lack of punctuation at certain places where there should be one.

    Other site related issues:
    - Add a space between the answer and the next question; it looks like one massive block right now.
    - Who is "our" and "us" in your About Us page? If it's just yourself, you should change About Us to only About and make sentences in first person.
    - What's with the empty field? Is that supposed to be a search box. You should fix it. No one knows it's one because there's no button or heading saying Search.

    Anyways, good stuff. Those textures look nice! I hope you do well.

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