Without knowing more I like the last 2 best.
I'm mulling over several possible slogans for my new game. Would love some feedback on them.
In order of length:
"Explore your inner, 7000 year epic." (value statement)
"Live ancient lives, just for you." (intimate experience)
"Ancient lives, lived just for you."
"The experience of lifetimes." (fluff statement)
"Make family history." (hint at fun)
Without knowing more I like the last 2 best.
Having looked at your game's website, the latter two strike me more as well.
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I'm getting similar feedback from other groups. Thanks for the input! It's nice to have some consensus.
Don't like this. Conjures up mental image of somebody rummaging about in their own intestines.
Don't like these ones. I just don't."Live ancient lives, just for you." (intimate experience)
"Ancient lives, lived just for you."
"The experience of lifetimes." (fluff statement)
This."Make family history." (hint at fun)
Also the two last ones.