yanuart
09-22-2005, 10:03 AM
Hi, since english isn't my mother language sometimes I find it hard to find the right "words" for my upcoming game. I know I shouldn't ask them for free but I don't know if there's a copywriter who want to take this simple job.
Anyway what I need is just 3 simple messages that'll appear when the player died in my game. It needs to be a simple yet funny messages that kinda taunt the player but in a good way I hope ;)
There are 3 way a player can died (it's a motocross game with a comic twist in it), which are :
1. When the player hit his head onto something
2. When the bike gets out of fuel
3. When the bike broke.
Any good suggestion from "Ouch, that gotta hurts" till "You suck" will be very appreciated. I can't promise anything in return but maybe I can giveaway few free copies when it released.
Anyway, mod can feel free to delete my post if you find this unappropriate.
Anyway what I need is just 3 simple messages that'll appear when the player died in my game. It needs to be a simple yet funny messages that kinda taunt the player but in a good way I hope ;)
There are 3 way a player can died (it's a motocross game with a comic twist in it), which are :
1. When the player hit his head onto something
2. When the bike gets out of fuel
3. When the bike broke.
Any good suggestion from "Ouch, that gotta hurts" till "You suck" will be very appreciated. I can't promise anything in return but maybe I can giveaway few free copies when it released.
Anyway, mod can feel free to delete my post if you find this unappropriate.