Feedback Request: First Stage Music

[eppskevin]

I've started the melody for my first stage music.

The drums aren't really that well yet, but everything is finalized. I think it's missing something else, but I can't think of what(outside of the drums). What do you think?


First Stage Music (http://www.allegro.cc/go/http://www.lostpolicy.com/first_stage-4.mp3)

[Pogacha]

I think in general it's fine, maybe some lows beats helps to rhytmic ... I don't understand the end also ... it's cyclic?

[janwinnicki]

Sounds like midi. Except drums it needs low bass line in my opinion (maybe not exatly like that (http://tiny.pl/qnq7) ;)). Some echo-like effects could help too.